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First of all I will say that there is a lot of potential, however it does need some work. Usually at least the way I do it chapters are kept together in one thread, so that people know when they've...

Can't wait for the third part. Hope it comes out soon!!!!

Loving this chapter. Only thing I'd suggest is to separate your scenes (any time in the story when a setting is changed or time is changed etc) with *** or ###. This way it will be easier for the...

Hey Ryan are you ever going to go back to this. If you hit a block let me know and I`ll see what I can do by throwing some ideas at you. Please post more soon.

I am so enjoying this and am looking forward to more :)

I was able to watch it too, not on the site but through the link-- modified slightly as it took me to a blank page. Awesome stuff. I'm looking forward to more

Link doesn't do anything, and what happens is there are these four little circles that rotate in a circle, as if its loading, but its not... I'm not sure what this means.

I loved it so far, but as for the most recent video I can't load it.

Not sure if he ever finshed it...

I understand about doing the story in first person as if the narator was Hawk however its better to show us whats happening rather then tell us whats happening. If that makes any sence. Ive done my...

I'll help, I have some other personal projects that Im working on but I would never miss a chance to co write something. Pm me and I'll see what i can do

Okay Dl Ive finally finshed your story and I think it was aswsome. It was a new version which was diffrent but over the last few days Ive gotten hooked and I beleive you did a really good job.

That is amazing. I know some piano but nothing as good as that way to go

I honestly think that they were given equal powers, though diffrent. Both charaters have diffrent jobs to do, on totally diffrent worlds therefore I beleive they are totally the same in terms of...

wow. this is amazing.

Awseome job Keep up the good work

got mine yesterday picked it up {via my parents} today. almost finshed. Its awsome!

Way to go guys. Thats awsome

Hey lets have a big old chat... theres two of us in the chatroom right now... well four two of which are away anyone want to join in.... come join the fun

Let me be the first to say great job thats aswome hip hip horay... sorry just had to do that. Way to go. Keep up the good work

Nice fic... hope to see more soon Keep going

Aswome clip Ryan. I love it. Great job Wish I knew how to do that but I don't Oh well a lot of people do it better then I do

count me in I bought season I at chapters and I am most likely going to do it again as I don't like the prices at HMV. Like everyone else I want the last piece of the puzzle

The only eps that I know where She-Ra goes to help her brother is the christmas special which is on a totally diffrent DVD. besides thatthere is an eps which Adora is planning on visiting her parents...

It would be nice to get another chapter soon... please.

Pretty neat. I like where this is going. Hope you post more soon

I got mine today in the mail, Im so happy :):)

I should be getting my set sometime next week, I preorded it when I realized it was coming out. :)

I am working on it... but right now I am not able to concentrate as I have caught the bug thats going around at work. I will get an update soon.... when Im feeling better.

Um yea my brothers laugh at me when I watch it. I can't force them to watch it, their bigger {younger but bigger} then I am... :(